Introductions:
What They Do
Introductions. An introduction should do at least four main
things:
i. Show that you have understood the title and what you are being
asked to do.
ii. State your objectives in the essay i.e. say what you are going
to do.
iii. Outline which aspects of the subject you are going to deal with
and how.
iv. Indicate what you are going to argue.
Another way of thinking about the introduction is that it should
draw a map for the reader. Imagine you are taking the reader on a
journey. Your introduction tells the reader not only the intended
final destination but the route you are going to take, the method
of transport, the places you are going to visit on the way, the people
you are going to meet and even some of the things they are going to
say.
If you can write an introduction like this then it will do a number
of things. It will show the reader you have understood the question.
It will show the reader you can think in an ordered, logical manner.
It will show the reader that you know your subject. For every essay
title there are things that tutors will expect to see mentioned. So
if you can say ‘This essay will look at X using the theories of Professor
Bloggs’, the person marking it is already interested.
Finally, drawing a map for the reader means drawing one for yourself.
If you can say clearly what you are going to do then all you’ve to
do is – do it!
Some Things An Introduction Can Do:
Present an overview of the essay’s subject e.g. ‘Scientific paradigms
in psychology were first theorised in…’
Set out the main idea of the essay.
Outline how the essay title will be interpreted.
Define important terms e.g. ‘This essay will use Professor Bloggs’s
definition of X which states that…’
Explain the methodology to be used in the essay and why it’s being
used.
Outline the issues to be explored in the essay.
Quote from another writer to get the reader’s attention and give
an idea of what the essay is about e.g. ‘This statement is typical
of a large number of writers who attempt to define the impact of globalisation
because…’
You may be able to add some of your own to the list.
Different Essays Need Different Introductions. There’s no
single form for an introduction. Different types of essays may require
different types of introduction. Different subjects may follow particular
conventions for written work. A social science or psychological study
of a group of people may start with details of the research sample.
A long essay or dissertation may start with a literature review. Your
tutor may even tell you not to waste time on elaborate introductions.
Nonetheless, the reader does need to have some idea of where your
essay is going to take them and what you are trying to achieve in
it.
First Things Last? All this implies that you have to write
your introduction first but you don’t have to. You should certainly
start out with a clear idea of what you are going to do but this can
be in draft or note form. After all, you may start out thinking you
are going to use the theories of Professor Bloggs and then, halfway
through writing, come across the theories of Professor Smith which
cast an interesting new light on your subject.
In fact, the ideal time to be thinking about your introduction is
when you’ve finished writing your essay. If that sounds odd then think
about this: a common problem with student essays is that they have
introductions that announce X, Y and Z and then don’t do them. So
always check your introduction against your essay. You’ve said everything
you want to say and you’ve got your essay into a form you are happy
with. Have you followed your own map? Do you need to add or remove
a few things here and there? Or do you need to draw a new one?
Sample Introductions. Here are some sample beginnings
of introductions:
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This book is about
writing university assignments at degree level. One of the main
reasons why we decided to write this book was that we wanted to
help students find ways of putting writing at the centre of their
learning.
Phyllis Crème and Mary R. Lea, Writing
at University |
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Salman Rushdie once gave a lecture called ‘Is Nothing
Sacred?’ in which he famously described literature as like a
voice-room, a place where a number of conflicting voices discuss
the world in which we live.
Rebecca Stott, Tory Young and
Cordelia Bryan, Speaking Your Mind: Oral Presentation
and Seminar Skills
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Writing is a craft – and a difficult one. Whether a writer
is writing a novel or a set of instructions for assembling a
futon, the words s/he chooses to assemble into sentences will
have to be drafted and drafted again
Rebecca Stott and Simon Avery,
Writing with Style
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